Two Beloveds

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Two Beloveds

Love
Two Awesome
I Love You
Eye Contact Brought Closer
Murmuring In Each Others Arms
Affection Was So Strong And Thick
Smelling, Cuddling, Touching, Feeling Came The Way
Olfactory, Visual, Auditory, Gustatory, Kinesthetic Senses Derived Pleasure
Time Passed By, Quarrels, Hatred, Misunderstandings, Uncompassionate Made Apart
Two Souls Realised Waiting To Reunite Until Death Bell Rang
 
Have Met Each Other For A Long Lasting Relationship Forever
The Waiting For Lives Gone Until Unification That Formed
Understanding Was Clear Both Of Them Could Hear
Happiness, Bliss Came All The Way Through
Senses Have No Part To Play
Prayer, Meditation, Chanting In Process
Not Seen Each Other
That Made Them
No Two
Love

Beloved Image 1 - CopyLove of God Image 1 - Copy

 

 

This is a Double Etheree of Two Beloveds I hope you could understand. The Straight Etheree is on the Human “Beloved” and the Reverse Etheree is on God –“The Beloved”.

 

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36 thoughts on “Two Beloveds

    DILKASH SHAYARI said:
    December 11, 2015 at 5:50 pm

    Beautiful Mind Blowing Creation Shiva Ji.

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    Maniparna Sengupta Majumder said:
    December 11, 2015 at 9:23 pm

    That was wonderful… 🙂

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    Deb said:
    December 12, 2015 at 2:53 am

    I get it! Two Beloveds refers to the Two Etherees not the Two people…once again Shiva your beautiful mind has gone above and beyond!! It is sad that they went thru the quarrel, hatred, misunderstanding part but I guess that is true life sometimes…but their souls realized and waited to reunite until death do them part! Much love & light!
    Deb

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      December 12, 2015 at 2:35 pm

      Ofcourse they are two Etherees and also two identities, that’s why the title Two Beloveds. One is the Human Beloved and the other is God the Beloved. About the human Beloveds, what it means to say is they stay back though realised but for their Ego they wait till the death bell rang. I hope you understand. As you know poetries can be interpreted in more ways. Sometimes more than what the Poet meant to convey.
      Thank You So Much!
      Shiva

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        Deb said:
        December 12, 2015 at 3:29 pm

        I did understand it that way, the first Etheree is Human and the second is God…you did convey that to me. I think I did interpret the Humans in a bit different manner than what you had in mind, however isn’t that the beauty of poetry – we get to interpret you in our own way! Have a beautiful day Shiva!
        Much love,
        Deb

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          Shiva Malekopmath responded:
          December 14, 2015 at 7:18 am

          Yes that’s right it is the beauty of Poetry.
          I think the more it gives ways to interpret the more beautiful it is I think.
          Amen!
          Shiva

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    patriciaruthsusan said:
    December 12, 2015 at 9:26 am

    Lovely. —- Suzanne J.

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    Ngobesing Romanus said:
    December 13, 2015 at 12:30 pm

    I feel powerful thoughts expressed here. I may not quite get the message you have in mind but I enjoy and appreciate the power of your thought.

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      December 15, 2015 at 2:05 pm

      The Power in your Appreciation is the Power that reflects of the Power in those words.
      You have expressed honestly of not getting the message may be fully, I feel if you can read it repeatedly it shall open the realms of your thoughts. Even otherwise if you want I can explain.
      Thanks
      Shiva

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    dilipnaidu said:
    December 14, 2015 at 2:41 pm

    Yes your words beautifully portray life’s realities.
    Thanks Shiva.

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    penneyvanderbilt said:
    December 16, 2015 at 5:50 pm

    Reblogged this on Crazy Pasta Child.

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    Geetha B said:
    December 23, 2015 at 7:46 am

    I did not know about Etheree when I first read your poem so just enjoyed it without a second thought. Now that you have pointed out about Etheree and asked me, your poem does not have the matching number of syllables but can be easily amended to match the Etheree form.
    You would begin like this
    Love
    Awesome
    I Love You
    Eye contact brought
    Closer Murmuring
    ……

    Now it has become 1, 2, 3, 4, 5. The thing is you will find yourself left with a lot of words as your syllable count was not right. Perhaps you can make it a quadruple Etheree.
    Thanks for the introduction to this form.I think I really should try it as I like it a lot 🙂

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      December 23, 2015 at 7:57 am

      Even I was not knowing about it, I explained it in the previous post “The Shining Rock”.
      I still could not get it.
      How do you count – ‘Eye contact brought’ is 4 and ‘closer murmuring’ is 5.
      Oh!
      It shakes the Head.

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      michnavs said:
      January 14, 2016 at 4:12 am

      Wow.. Geetha i love at how you transformed it..

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        Geetha B said:
        January 14, 2016 at 4:18 am

        Thanks Mich. I was hoping Shiva would rewrite a quadruple Etheree using the same post as it is beautiful and he could make it according to the rules of Etheree in a second post.

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          michnavs said:
          January 14, 2016 at 6:24 am

          Yeah that would be great…

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          Shiva Malekopmath responded:
          January 14, 2016 at 8:47 am

          Geetha!
          You did tell me about it, but I didn’t think of that.
          I am scared I would kill the whole meaning or put the whole thing into confusion.
          I give the liberty to you to do that, I shall be very happy if you can write it.
          May be I am weak at understanding syllables.
          There is one more love poem spiralling in my head which has to yet come out into words.
          Thanks,
          Shiva

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            Geetha B said:
            January 14, 2016 at 8:58 am

            Lovely! Thank you for your trust and I will get back to you 🙂

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          Shiva Malekopmath responded:
          January 14, 2016 at 8:59 am

          I have replied to you on that and have mentioned to Mich also on that in my “Distant Heart” comment box.
          I love the way you both are interested in the various forms of writing Poetry.
          Let us Explore; from this world outside of us and much greater things from within of us.
          Pats!
          Shiva

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            Geetha B said:
            January 14, 2016 at 9:16 am

            Yes it is great to explore Shiva. Thanks for the introduction to such a beautiful form

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              Shiva Malekopmath responded:
              January 14, 2016 at 9:28 am

              There is a lot, that is there for us in store.
              EXPLORE, EXPEDITE, EXPRESS, EXPLICIT so YOU can add……….
              Shiva

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    Ashish kumar said:
    December 31, 2015 at 11:07 am

    This is a gem, an “epitome”…. great creation… 🙂

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    Swetha M said:
    January 8, 2016 at 11:05 am

    Subtle words but powerful meaning! You really have a way with expression. 🙂

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    michnavs said:
    January 14, 2016 at 4:09 am

    Shiva this is beautiful.. etheree …counting on the number of words not syllables… i am in awe..

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    thelonelyauthorblog said:
    January 20, 2016 at 6:11 pm

    Thsi is beautiful and so powerful. Great work my friend.

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    atrangizindagieksafar said:
    April 30, 2017 at 3:53 pm

    This is so beautifully woven Shiva… just what I needed after a hectic day of setting up the house. I must have read it thrice… each time it sounded more beautiful to me

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      April 30, 2017 at 3:58 pm

      That’s so Good to have come after the hectic days. I understand.
      I an glad you liked it so much. Ranjini!
      Hugs
      Shiva

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