Yaar Suraj
Yaar Suraj!
Yaar Suraj! Mein bhi dekhraha hoon, jab se mein chota tha
Tum toh roz uday hote ho, doob the ho,
Tumne kabhi viram le hai?
Bus keh dalte hain ke tum aate ho jaate ho
Yun toh tum kabhi Suryodaya, Suryaastha hua hi nahi
Khayal karenge tum agar ek pal bhi agar viram karoge
Kya hoga hamari halaat, pakshi, machali, samandar jeevan ki, ped poudounki
Tum aisa nahi kar sakte, kyon ki tum apna yaar ho
Surya Narayan ho
Tumhe hum sab ki taraf se Shukriyaada Namostute!
Translation in English 👇
Translation in English
Ohhh My Friend Sun!
Ooh Friend Sun! I am seeing you since I was a child
Everyday you come up and go down
Have you ever taken rest?
We keep telling you just come and just go
Actually there is no Sunrise and Sunset
Let us think for a while if you take rest
What will be of us Humans, Birds, Animals, Fish, Aqua Ocean life and Plants and Trees?
You cannot do so because You are My Friend You See!
You are the Sun God Narayan!
Thanks to You on behalf of All of us Namostute!
theshivasponder 
February 2, 2022 at 4:11 pm
Beautiful picture of our sun and you have written a lovely poem, Shiva.
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February 2, 2022 at 9:49 pm
Is that in Hindi? I have been learning it in the Davanagari script and so am unfamiliar with it written in Roman alphabet. But I know only a little anyway. I love the photos and would love to see a translation of the poem in English.
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February 3, 2022 at 4:18 am
Yes it is in Hindi
Thanks for reading it.
So nice you are learning the Devanagari script.
Now, demand from you and other friends here I have translated it in English you can go through.
Comment please
Thanks once again.
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February 3, 2022 at 6:04 pm
How wonderful!! Thank you so much. I’m very happy that my name is maybe in your poem? Suryodaya. Dawn is just before the sunrise. Do you have another word for Dawn?
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February 8, 2022 at 5:49 pm
Beautiful poem..
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February 8, 2022 at 6:47 pm
Thanks soo much
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February 11, 2022 at 10:39 am
Kya khoob likha hai sir apne… Indeed, Sun is the ultimate source of energy and you have paid a “gratitude” to Sun through this poem…
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February 11, 2022 at 1:11 pm
You are also included in the gratitude Ashish.
Thanks for khoob comment Dear.
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February 17, 2022 at 4:47 am
Shiva, this is full of compassion and love for the sun, I really love it. it’s like you are talking to a good friend.
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February 17, 2022 at 10:44 am
Yes Cornelia I am talking to the Best Friend, my title is also on that.
If we are able to make friends with everything in Nature it also responds so well.
Everyday when I see the Sun I say a Sun Prayer in Sanskrit that is also a Mantra.
I feel it has touched him and he smiles.
It goes on every Sunrise and Sunset.
Thanks for your thoughtful comment.
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February 19, 2022 at 4:27 am
Thank you Shiva. I take a walk almost every early morning and every day I feel the bliss of nature.
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September 8, 2022 at 6:26 pm
We all love the sun n feel blessed that we r given a day more to enjoy life. Your lines made me view The Sun as another important person in my life
WOW!!
Only you n the poet in you could have brought out such beautiful lines!
Excellent!!
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February 19, 2022 at 6:00 am
What a time and situation, it is the inner and outer Bliss you enjoy. What blessed Woman you are.
That is why they say it is the Brahmi Muhurut.
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April 2, 2022 at 8:01 pm
Beautiful poem and I liked the writing style too. All pics are great Shiva.
Suraj viram nahi le sakta kyonki duniya uske saath chal rahi hai. Din aur raat uske saath-saath bandhe hai.
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April 3, 2022 at 7:29 am
सूर्य के बिना जो हम जानते हैं वह सेकंड के लिए नहीं रह सकते हैं
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April 3, 2022 at 7:39 am
This message has not come in my Blog post
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April 3, 2022 at 7:41 am
It now appeared
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April 4, 2022 at 4:54 am
I don’t know the reason. Anyways, I’ll post it again.
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April 4, 2022 at 5:11 am
It took some time I don’t know why, they appeared. So thanks
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April 4, 2022 at 4:54 am
Beautiful poem and I liked the writing style too. All pics are great Shiva. Suraj viram nahi le sakta kyonki duniya uske saath chal rahi hai. Din aur raat uske saath-saath bandhe hai.
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April 4, 2022 at 5:13 am
So nice Ya you commented the same exactly one more time.
इसके लिए मैं वास्तव में आपकी सराहना करता हूं।क्या आप कृपया अन्य हिंदी पोस्टों पर टिप्पणी कर सकते हैं जिनकी मैं सराहना करूंगा। धन्यवाद
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April 3, 2022 at 7:42 am
It now appeared
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April 18, 2022 at 10:53 am
Thank you, Shiva, for you beautifully written Ode To Sun God!
Joanna
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April 18, 2022 at 10:57 am
PS, “Your”, apologies!
Joanna
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April 18, 2022 at 11:07 am
You need not apologise Lady
Thanks for the visit
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