I & Life Fight; Peacefully
This Post was Published on April 3 2017
I & Life Fight; Peacefully
I fight
With Life
It fights with Me
We have fought enough
There were better tournaments
To Participate, Play and Win
I have won few
It has won few
Sometimes there was a draw
Its not like we do not fight anymore
Maybe both are fed up with each other
Both ask each other – why fight?
And we both agreed
Life goes on
So, Life and I go peacefully
I am feeling it is neither a Poem nor a Prose. We can name it as “Prosetry”.
I have seen and read so many blogs and many bloggers do write this way. Whatever that comes to mind we write and can write. So go writing “PROSETRY”……
I think its the best way of expressing oneself and its the best way to make know and convey your message to the readers. Sometimes writers are in a fix to write prose or poetry and maybe they remain in a dilemma and shall tend not to write anything, instead adopt this new style “Prosetry”.
I went into the details to capture some thoughts and landed in the below mentioned link. Please go read.
I think we BLOGGERS can popularize this way of expression and writing – “PROSETRY”
I have included this word into my Computer dictionary, if you like it you may do so.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prose_poetry
The ‘se’ in PROSETRY has to be pronounced as in Possession. I hope you understand. So let us make it popular.
I have edited the post and have added this above line, after having a discussion in the comments. You may please inform your opinion about that in your comments. Thanks
April 3, 2017 at 8:48 am
When we fought with life so often at one point we are so closely connected that we actually should consider to fight together and not against each other.
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April 3, 2017 at 8:59 am
It does mean that Erika!
What you are saying is true, we actually fight together with each other, Hahaha. Otherwise life shall pull us on one side and we shall pull against it. Or it happens like this also, one of them may tend to be passive and the other shall become helpless, it cannot fight and there shall be no fight. So, both have to fight together and with each other.
Some things are controversially contradictory. I hope you understand what I mean. 🙂
xoxo
Shiva
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April 3, 2017 at 11:19 am
I actually thought we needed to fight allied with life and not against life. But of course, your words are a truth we need to get more aware about! The separation caused by some political heads show even more how important and desired a union is!
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April 8, 2017 at 3:15 pm
Oh Erika I am sorry I had not seen this response comment of yours. You already know I had commented on this thought on your blog post also. I have been receiving various comments on this and just now I have replied to what Deb had to say. Please if you have the time you may please read it to know more of what you understand and of what life expects of us.
By the way Erika you have not said anything about the word “Prosetry” which everyone have liked and would want to popularize it, One blogger has already created a Post on that. Please do come here and see how they have responded. You can also, being a senior blogger, contribute to its popularity. I expect a small comment of yours on ‘Prosetry’ here.
Thanks
Shiva
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April 8, 2017 at 3:46 pm
You know, everybody reflects to something else which makes blogging so interesting. You get the a bigger range of opinions and thoughts. My thoughts went to togetherness which seems to be important to me… to tell from my immediate thought. I cannot promise to come back and read the post again and all the comments. You would understand if you knew what’s going on in my life. But I will keep it in mind, Shiva!
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April 8, 2017 at 4:11 pm
It is OK Erika I do not insist on your coming back and contribute, you have given your opinion and your immediate thought I am equally happy about that. I understand what you mean and its everyone’s life that makes so. I only wanted or was more than necessary anxious. Thanks
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April 8, 2017 at 4:18 pm
Thank you for your understanding, Shiva (I am still replying to my comments… lol). Don’t get me wrong. I appreciate your request a lot and it honors me. As I said, I keep it in mind for sure. 😊
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April 8, 2017 at 4:25 pm
Thanks Erika I get You right. 🙂
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April 8, 2017 at 7:58 pm
😊💖
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April 3, 2017 at 9:17 am
Dear Shiva. I’m glad you and your life can now live peacefully 🙂
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April 3, 2017 at 9:21 am
We have to keep on saying this, so then shall we all live Peacefully……Hahaha
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April 3, 2017 at 9:25 am
It’s necessary to be able to live with yourself. The person who can’t is in trouble. Good writing, Shiva, and good new word. 🙂 — Suzanne
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April 3, 2017 at 9:32 am
Wow! Thanks Maam!
That is what I mean to say here, one has to fight to live. To avoid the trouble has to fight. Over the years becomes an expert to fight and the fight goes peacefully with understanding each other. Hahaha.
You liked the word, I am happy to know. 🙂
Thanks
Shiva
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April 3, 2017 at 10:00 am
That’s a great way to write!! Prosetry 👍🏻👍🏻 Sounds like a deal..
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April 3, 2017 at 10:32 am
Sounds like a deal….😀 Hahaha!
The se in it has to be pronounced as in Possession. I hope you understand. So let us make it popular.
Noorainsobiya! start writing now….👍👌👏🙏🎶
Shiva
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April 3, 2017 at 10:42 am
Shiva let me first congratulate for writing so beautifully and yes we do fight with our life and oh, our poor life has to give in to us. U have created a great word PROSETRY, loved it cause you rightly said we write what comes from our heart and not simply writing it takes great effort to write from our Soul. So good post.
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April 3, 2017 at 11:07 am
Kamal!
Only if we fight it shall also fight. You have rightly understood the gist.
I am so happy you loved the new word Prosetry. I feel if one thoroughly understand the idea the words shall flow from all. What comes in our mind just going on putting them in words. So, now Dear add the word to your computer. 😀🙏
Now be more Boundless and start writing….👍👌👏
Shiva
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April 3, 2017 at 11:21 am
Thanks Shiva for your kind words and yes I write like this only, do not refer to anything, the words just flow and for sure will definitely keep on writing and same goes for you to Shiva. You write so beautifully, feels so nice to read your post always.
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April 3, 2017 at 12:10 pm
Kamal do it Baba! When it flows let it free. Find a paper & pen.
This post I wrote in the middle of the night within 15 seconds. There are some thoughts which are lingering for days and some since months.
Thanks for the good words on my writing, only see that my ego does not get boosted.
Thanks
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April 3, 2017 at 12:35 pm
Great happens with me too Shiva remember at anytime and even I do that
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April 3, 2017 at 6:17 pm
That’s so good.
Sometimes we miss too and it is difficult to catch them back. Encashing it at the right time is also our intelligence and test of our procrastination.
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April 4, 2017 at 5:14 am
Absolutely true Shiva and we need to get out of procrastination now when we have got the opportunity.
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April 3, 2017 at 6:27 pm
That’s so good.
Sometimes we miss too and it is difficult to catch them back. Encashing it at the right time is also our intelligence and test of our procrastination. 🤔
OMG Kamal I trying to post this comment several times, the net is going and coming. OK one more attempt.
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April 4, 2017 at 2:40 am
Thanks and yes our net is funny sometimes our comments do not go. Yes we really miss everything somewhere in this world and to really know who we r is a revelation and must not delay it but keep on pursuing
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April 3, 2017 at 11:21 am
I have written a beautiful poem do let me know if you liked it.
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April 3, 2017 at 12:14 pm
Yes I saw in a hurry , one of freeing the Bird and the story of the Buddha. Kamal you write beautifully and I would not want to make a hurried comment. I shall be there in a few hours from now.
See you there…..
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April 3, 2017 at 1:16 pm
Kk for sure Shiva take your time
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April 3, 2017 at 12:27 pm
Good work Shiva,
if you asking me the name is not important.It is important what you want to say,and you my friend had a lot to say us.You are great writer.Keep it going
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April 3, 2017 at 12:59 pm
Thanks Ben! It means a lot.
I am just boosting others of their thoughts in their mind to come out through Prosetry. 😀
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April 3, 2017 at 4:09 pm
If we keep control of ourselves, we do not need to fight with life, because we will always anticipate things and avoid anything that can destroy us.
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April 3, 2017 at 6:39 pm
A great post in both ways!
Yes you have so correctly addressed the dilemma of a writer who wants to express so truly that it sometimes cannot be categorized prose or poetry.
And your prosetory is very apt …we learn the ways of peace in life after facing it like a fight for long. Life always gives back what we see it as …fight or peace.
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April 5, 2017 at 10:34 am
Thank You. I am delighted to know of your appreciation for the new word and the style of writing. It is Prosetry and not Prosetory.
People who have fought with life I mean struggled can catch the gist, I feel you have struggled enough. Do you could judge the post in its right perspective.
Regards
Shiva
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April 5, 2017 at 8:06 pm
Yes prosetry, thank you for correcting me there 🙂 and your deep insight of my response.
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April 6, 2017 at 3:23 am
Hello Shiva , apki post read krne ke baad maine apne aap ko PROSETRY se link kiya , kya shi mai aisa bhi koi type hota hai kya likhne ka ?mai jb likhti hu toh mujhe pta nhi hota ki kha pr PROSE aa rha hai aur kha POETRY , kya is trah ki writing type ka bloggers ke beech mai koi sthan hai .
Kya aap mujhe guide kr sktey hai ?mera URLhai http://www.lifeanditsstorie.wordpress.com
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April 6, 2017 at 8:14 am
Mrs Vachaal!
Yes I am happy to receive your this comment.
Dekhiye behenji aap jiske baaren pucha hai woh bahut sahi hai. Bahut sare Bloggers aise hi likhte hain.
Aap bus likhte jayiyega sthan ke baren mat sochiye.
Jo aap ko ji chahata hai woh likhiye bus.
Aage aap dekhenge kya aur kaisa log aap ka likhawat kaise pasand log karenge.
Aap ne apna link diya hai main jaldhi aap ke vahan pohunchunga.
Mere aur bhi chand posts hai dekhlijiyega.
Shukriya
Pyar Bhara Namaskar
Shiva
😃🎶
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April 6, 2017 at 9:44 am
Dhanyvad 😊
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April 6, 2017 at 2:44 pm
Yourt link goes to say that the blog does not exist:
lifeanditsstorie.wordpress.com doesn’t exist
This is the link you given:
https://en.wordpress.com/typo/?subdomain=lifeanditsstorie
Please check
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April 7, 2017 at 5:08 am
Oh sorry mai aap ko fir se link bhejti hu …www.lifeanditsstories.wordpress.com
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April 6, 2017 at 4:16 am
A great post in each and every way !!👌😎
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April 6, 2017 at 7:58 am
Akshay thanks and great to receive your valuable comment.
Shiva
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April 6, 2017 at 8:10 am
My pleasure !!✌
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April 6, 2017 at 9:19 am
Glad to know finally life is in harmony with your thoughts,.
I like the new creation- ‘Prosetry’.I think this is what suits most of my writings which land midway between prose and poetry.
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April 6, 2017 at 9:45 am
Life offers so many things to choose from. So, therefore we keep fighting with it. Once a harmony is set in so comes peace from all corners.
Your latest post from where we both came just a few minutes back is a sort of harmony set. A great Pledge!!!
The word “Prosetry” shall hold good to all writers, it seems to get popular among us All. Thanks for acknowledging it.
Keep up the boost and write more Prosetry.😀🎶
Shiva
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April 6, 2017 at 9:48 am
Yes you are absolutely right,initially there is struggle but after a lot of noise and trials of making things silent things finally resort to silence and clarity seeps in.
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April 6, 2017 at 11:16 am
Yes it is now Multitude Of My Thoughts!
😃🙏🎶😍😚
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April 6, 2017 at 11:18 am
Yes logically and literally also..hahaah…
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April 6, 2017 at 11:50 am
Ohhh what a brilliant proposition Shiva..that’s really cool..
Why not…?
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April 6, 2017 at 12:19 pm
I see that Coolness in your Blog Dear Mich!
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April 6, 2017 at 12:20 pm
Mich you meant “Prosetry”is it?
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April 6, 2017 at 12:38 pm
Oh yeah Shiva..i meant the “prosetry”….it would be nice if we could popularize that one..since you were right when you say most of us write in that manner
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April 6, 2017 at 12:45 pm
Since You, Me and All
Can make it.
Shall make it.
Will make it.
Then make it…….
Hahaha
Hehehe
This is Prosetry.
Can it be called so…..
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April 6, 2017 at 12:47 pm
👏👏👏bravo
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April 6, 2017 at 5:25 pm
Beautiful Shiva… don’t we all do the same… only we don’t admit. Rishika writes more like this… I’ll also give it a try. Give me a day. I’ll be back with you with all the details
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April 6, 2017 at 5:30 pm
Write some words about the Word ‘Prosetry’ I want to create a menu for that.
OK Dear Good Night!
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April 6, 2017 at 5:30 pm
Ok
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April 6, 2017 at 5:34 pm
Chk mail
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April 6, 2017 at 5:39 pm
Yes I have replied. Thanks
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April 6, 2017 at 8:00 pm
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April 7, 2017 at 12:56 am
Oh Shiva first I love your new word Prosetry…brilliant! Second don’t we all start out fighting with life and then once we get older and wiser we decide to appreciate life and work together with life!! It’s a shame we couldn’t be wiser when we’re younger. The elders always would advise us but being young and foolish we did not listen to them…now we understand. Now we are the elders trying to explain life to the youngsters…but just like us they have to learn for themselves!! I love you’re animation at the end too…so fun!!
Deb
xo
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April 8, 2017 at 2:43 pm
Oh Deb!I am happy that you loved the new word Prosetry. Actually I was thinking how all will receive it. I am overwhelmed that the word is being received with full acceptance. I have seen many do write opening their heart and the words just come out from the mind and heart so fluently that it becomes readable and it becomes enjoyable. Some tend not to write at all in the fear of what it’s going to be a Prose or Poetry, and poor thing their feelings and thoughts are left in vain.
So ‘Prosetry’ shall help everyone’s feelings, thoughts, perceptions and introspections to come to light. Don’t you think so Deb?
I am amazed how everyone reacts to the lines in their own ways and feelings. I remember you checking me on that to receive it more delightfully as my writings are received in more than the ways I had thought. It is rather a feather in my cap, its all by your graceful thought.
We all have conflicts in life, life demands of us on something and we tend to do something else and the conflict starts. We also struggle to fulfill our desires and when they are difficult to attain, we struggle still more in spite of all the conflicts. As you have said –‘don’t we all start out fighting with life and then once we get older and wiser we decide to appreciate life and work together with life!!’ – so our intentions are different and the goals we had to set are different, that is why the elders had to come in between to give that awesome piece of advice.
So life keeps on putting us in the right track, inviting us to think and act in a proper way, putting odds in front of us to jump upon (not to stumble and fall) and cross. In the process we become experienced and attain the knowledge. That is where the maturity comes and as you say –‘now we understand. Now we are the elders trying to explain life to the youngsters…but just like us they have to learn for themselves!!’
So Life goes on Deb! Like this ….and that is why the last line.
So, Life and I go peacefully
Shiva
xo
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April 8, 2017 at 10:55 pm
Beautifully stated Shiva!! There’s nothing more I could add to this, you have touched on everything perfectly. So Life and I go peacefully is such a wise statement too!! Brilliant!
xo
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April 8, 2017 at 1:01 am
Shiva I’ve tagged you in a Song a Day Challenge…I thought you might enjoy it. No worries if you don’t want to do it. Here’s the link in case you do.
https://onceuponahotflash.com/2017/04/07/song-a-day-challenge/
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April 8, 2017 at 2:57 pm
Wow Deb when I first saw this comment of yours to participate in the song a day, I thought we have to write a song a day and OMG! for how many days, then thought it would not be a possibility. When I went to your linked post I came to know we have to present a song liked by us.
Now my head is all about that, you have now engaged my mind to think of doing it and do How? What? When?……so on….
You thought I will enjoy it, OK Dear I will enjoy it. Hahaha
Shiva
Hugs
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April 8, 2017 at 11:04 pm
Lol, oh dear Shiva, now that really would be a challenge!! I know how you appreciate and enjoy music so I thought you might have some fun with it. Do what you want, no obligations, just fun!!
Deb
Hugs
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April 9, 2017 at 7:14 am
OK Deb! you will see what fun we all shall have. Only thing I need some time to prepare all the five ones at a stretch and post them as per schedule, cause I would not want to do them one by one as I cannot do that, my personal schedules are erratic and you know that.
Be sure I shall make it interesting and enjoyable to you all.
Shiva
Hugs
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April 9, 2017 at 12:58 pm
There’s no time limit Shiva, do it whenever you like. I do know of time limits and busy schedules so even if you don’t do all 5 that’s ok too. Only do it if it’s fun to you, not if it’s a chore. I am sure that you shall make it interesting and enjoyable, you always do!
Deb
xo
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April 9, 2017 at 7:16 am
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April 9, 2017 at 7:22 am
Ipuna What a coincidence I was at your blog and you came here. I saw my name in this particular post. Shall be back to you there. Thanks
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April 10, 2017 at 12:05 am
Shiva,
I find that life for me has been a rollercoaster. Sometimes I fight situations that are out of my hand in life, and other times, I embrace it and try to learn and grow from my trials in life. Ultimately, life will keep trucking along, so I have realized it is best to not fight with it. Instead, try and enjoy every moment of it. (Even the bad times can teach us something.)
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April 10, 2017 at 7:39 am
Ipuna this the gist of the post what you are saying. I mean to say that only. You have said the same thing in different words.
How did you feel the word Prosetry?
Thanks , your visit means a lot always.😃
Shiva
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April 10, 2017 at 9:20 pm
Great! Then, I’m not off base. Ha ha. I had never heard of it until you mentioned it, but I like it. Thanks for explaining it.
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April 11, 2017 at 3:56 am
Ipuna how can you hear it, the word ‘PROSETRY’is a new invention, hahaha.
This style of writing is adopted since long, I have only given it a new name. They used to say it as ‘Prose-Poem’. For details refer the the Wikipedia link I have given.😃
So you may start writing Prosetry.😀
Thanks
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April 11, 2017 at 7:19 pm
Wonderful words. We often fight with life but we generally understand that it’s better to make a deal and walk together…
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April 12, 2017 at 6:40 pm
Maniparna! Its been ages of your visit. Even I have not been to you since long.
Yes this is life and as you said there was an understanding, now shall make a deal and walk to You, I mean your Blog.😃
Thanks
Shiva
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April 12, 2017 at 7:11 pm
I was off for about a month. Glad to be back with blogging and reading blogger friends’ posts… 🙂
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April 13, 2017 at 2:08 am
Hi Maniparna welcome back. In the post a new word is mentioned and I did expect you to say something about that. Since you are also an esteemed writer.
My new post is getting published in an hour please do read that ; ‘Where shall I be…. the Quest Remains’😃
Thanks
Shiva
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April 14, 2017 at 9:27 pm
I think, you mean “prosetry”…a nice coinage. But this kind of poetry, with an open form, no typical meter or rhyme, is better known as free verse… 🙂
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April 15, 2017 at 12:58 pm
Thanks Maniparna.😃
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April 12, 2017 at 12:41 pm
Hi Shiva, I learnt a new something new today from your post- prosetry! It is such an amazing piece of work.
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April 12, 2017 at 6:36 pm
Radhika you may also start writing that Prosetry. Hahaha
You just start scribbling what comes in your mind. Hehehe
Thanks and keep in touch it always benefits.😃
Shiva
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April 13, 2017 at 2:44 am
Thanks Shiva. Will probably try it some day🙂
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April 12, 2017 at 12:58 pm
So beautifully written Siva, liked your command on words!!
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April 12, 2017 at 6:34 pm
😃 So much thanks Sumith!
I had come to your Blog and visited so many of your posts all mouth watering Man!
The dishes look gorgeous.
You are gifted with that Art.
Keep in touch Dear!
Shiva
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April 12, 2017 at 7:39 pm
Thanks a lot Siva. Love the way you appreciate others.
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April 18, 2017 at 12:34 pm
Ranjini I am very happy to read your Prosetry just now.
You have brought out what a Kid is and you have brought in what a Kid is in an Adult.😃
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February 11, 2018 at 6:14 am
Ranju thanks, but I cannot visit your site from the mobile WP App, so many times I have tried.
This morning went to your post Dreams, it has come up very nice. But I recommend you to brighten a bit the colors of the fonts.
No news from you since long. After you went to self host your Blog there has been difficulty in reading your blogs. This I have experienced with many bloggers.I do not know why.
Anyways how are things with you.
Have a joyful Sunday.
🌷
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February 14, 2018 at 7:08 pm
Interesting very interesting 👍
Going to add this New Found Prosetry in my writings too!!
Thank You so much for letting me use this new invention of yours Shiva!
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February 15, 2018 at 2:57 am
So nice, you found it interesting.
English writers have recognised it as Prose -Poem; after a bit of research I have concluded it as Prosetry. This form of writing is getting very popular, one can express the thoughts with ease.
You can as well give the link of this post. To make readers know better.
Meenakshi you have not gone through the other link of “Celestial Embrace”that you will not only feel interesting but I think you will love it. I am telling it to You which I would not do to many.
Have a nice day.
Start writing Prosetry which you have already been doing. Darshan of Celestial being. 😃
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July 9, 2018 at 8:10 pm
Very original and beautifully expressed. I like the personification of Life as if it were a friend-enemy with whom you had tournaments and, in the end, so tired of fighting with each other, you take it as a companion and the decision is to reach harmony. Love the term prosetry.
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July 22, 2018 at 11:08 am
Ohh Marta you gave the right description for the lines. When we find it as a right companion things will be in harmony.
Prosetry_ It made me think so because in WP most bloggers write like that.
I am happy you liked it.
Thanks
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July 22, 2018 at 12:44 pm
My pleasure.
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