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Shot Point-Blank

Bleeding you see

Go unnoticeably as if

Love tears flow with no Esteem

Creating Scars

 

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44 thoughts on “Point-Blank”

    mariannescottwriter said:
    May 2, 2016 at 12:17 pm

    Bleeding eyes – a powerful message that can be interpreted in so many ways in a world so violent surrounding gentle loving people who see only peace, love, and joy. Photoshop is a wonderful tool.

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      May 2, 2016 at 2:15 pm

      Marianne!
      You are right the Post can be interpreted in so many ways.
      You talk of violence and love how much difference it makes you see.
      Thanks for the Photoshop tool information.
      Regards,
      Shiva

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    patriciaruthsusan said:
    May 2, 2016 at 1:04 pm

    It’s a shame that some are hurt and we don’t realize it. We all need to stop wounding with our words and develop more empathy. —- Suzanne

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      May 2, 2016 at 1:53 pm

      Dear Maam !
      By your kind words half the wound is healed.
      Hurting has been a way of life.
      Thanks for your encouraging words always.
      Be it in sorrow or joy your words touch the Heart.
      Love to You.
      Shiva

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    Alok Singhal said:
    May 2, 2016 at 1:16 pm

    Beautifully written, though i wish nobody is sad to this extent!

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      May 2, 2016 at 2:12 pm

      Thanks Alok!
      Your words are always encouraging.
      I hope you were busy and travelling all over the world I suppose.
      You have been here after a long time.
      I did miss You Yaar!
      Love
      Shiva

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        Alok Singhal said:
        May 2, 2016 at 2:13 pm

        Not world, but was in California for 10 days 🙂

        Thank you, Shiva…always good to read your work.

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    Erika Kind said:
    May 2, 2016 at 3:22 pm

    The silent hidden tears! Only seen by the compassionate eyes!

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    stacilys said:
    May 2, 2016 at 7:59 pm

    Amazing photos, and sentimental write.
    🙂

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    Maniparna Sengupta Majumder said:
    May 2, 2016 at 10:09 pm

    Silence says more than words…the unheard stories of tears…

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    Deb said:
    May 3, 2016 at 11:31 pm

    “Love tears flow with no Esteem” powerful and thought-provoking…this one’s a sad one. 😦

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      May 5, 2016 at 9:13 am

      Deb Dear!
      Most hurt we receive from the loved ones; otherwise the hurt caused by others is not so deep and is forgotten soon. They (Loved Ones) have full rights I think to cause the hurt, but they take it as liberty and authority to exercise the right. That causes the whole problem. Ultimately to bleed with tears and form scars.

      Getting to be sad has now been a habit. What to do!
      Hugs!
      Shiva

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        Deb said:
        May 5, 2016 at 11:24 am

        You are right, the ones we love the most hurt us the most because we care. Habits can be changed but it takes effort. We must fill our time with what puts a smile on our face and know that He comes first and foremost and if we honor Him that all else will be right. Thank and please Him and you shall be blessed and pleased in return!
        🙂
        Deb!

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          Shiva Malekopmath responded:
          May 5, 2016 at 3:01 pm

          In this case HE is not to be taken in between. HE is not going to do much about it, until one mingles, cares and loves this mundane world and the people.
          Ha! We can say so-the more we love the world the less he is bothered.
          “The more you are Hurt, the more you tend to Start Loving HIM.”
          Shiva

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            Deb said:
            May 5, 2016 at 3:22 pm

            I believe that the more you thank Him for your blessings and favors and things you aren’t even aware of that He has done for you, the more He will improve your life and remove the hurt. Without you even realizing it.
            We should love Him always regardless of hurting or happiness.
            Deb!
            🙂

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    swamiyesudas said:
    May 5, 2016 at 10:21 am

    Well said, my Dear Shiva.

    Point blank means from very close. Even our Closest ones wound us.

    And as We, the World, the Poor, lie Bleeding, the World, and We, go without noticing, Ignoring, atcually.

    Kudos on this. Loka Samsttha Sukhino Bhavantu.

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    Ipuna Black said:
    May 5, 2016 at 4:19 pm

    So much pain behind those eyes! I love the images. Thanks for sharing!

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      May 5, 2016 at 5:58 pm

      Ipuna!
      How are things with You.
      I plan to visit you very soon.
      So many things crop up and am left
      with things of the world.
      Have you written anything lately.
      Regards
      Shiva

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    penneyvanderbilt said:
    May 11, 2016 at 4:02 pm

    Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      May 11, 2016 at 5:37 pm

      Thanks for the Reblog, but I see the Post has not appeared on the Ancient Hippie.

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    jacquelineobyikocha said:
    May 12, 2016 at 3:35 am

    Tears speak volumes.

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    Featured Posts 52…Let me share your post links. | a cooking pot and twistedtales said:
    May 12, 2016 at 7:39 am

    […] Point blank, sometimes when the words are not enough, the tears drop to express itself. […]

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    rosemawrites said:
    May 12, 2016 at 9:17 am

    deep and dark! Great job!

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    BroadBlogs said:
    May 13, 2016 at 4:58 pm

    That’s a thought-provoking point. I wonder how we would all look if our emotional scars showed. And if we would treat others more kindly.

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      May 14, 2016 at 4:05 am

      Good Morning!
      There is a point in your point of observation.
      Maybe, one would look ugly with the scars on the face and chest though, but that would help and caution others not make ones for their own selves.
      As a result, as you say would make them more kind .
      Point-Blank! Ha Ha !!!!
      Shiva

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    lucydanvers said:
    May 15, 2016 at 12:16 pm

    Wonderful writing; I really enjoyed this poem and the pictures are a great touch.

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    daramemon said:
    May 30, 2016 at 1:46 am

    Great thought

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    radhikasreflection said:
    December 10, 2017 at 6:55 am

    The hurt, tears and the scar stay with the readers through your powerful words Shiva. The picture too adds to the impact. Well done to bring out the heart ripping emotion.

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      December 10, 2017 at 7:32 am

      In the midst of the Heart ripping emotion
      Words play to create a commotion
      In bright day light pierced by your vision
      The wait showed me a direction
      Amid all hurt, tears, scar and all the good in motion
      I am on my way to salvation

      Oh Radhika this I think could be my next poem.
      Shall I publish it.
      Thanks for the Inspiration

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        radhikasreflection said:
        December 10, 2017 at 7:36 am

        Truly beautiful Shiva. Go ahead and publish it 👍

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          Shiva Malekopmath responded:
          December 10, 2017 at 7:41 am

          OK thanks I shall see if I can polish it still more..

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          Shiva Malekopmath responded:
          December 17, 2017 at 2:56 pm

          Radhika! I have scheduled my poem for tomorrow afternoon, you can read it, I have referred our above discussion in that and have given link to your Blog.
          Thanks once again

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    radhikasreflection said:
    December 17, 2017 at 3:24 pm

    Looking forward to reading it Shiva!

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    Syed Brothers said:
    October 19, 2020 at 10:27 am

    Great article .

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