Distant Heart

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Distant Heart

A call from the Distant Heart
From a World Apart
 
Bodies that never Met
Wished wings they couldn’t Get

 

Minds craving to meet and Flourish
Circumstances could not Accomplish
 
Tears flow on each other’s Face
But with a smile in the Grace
 
No regrets for being Divided
Its Time that Decided
 
Time not in existence for Both
Into togetherness they took the Oath
 
Thinking of each other in Eternity
Love for one another in Entirety
 
Soulmates meet on Earth
In Heaven, if not, it is its Dearth
 
No Body required, they Meet Anywhere
No Place required, they Meet Everywhere

 

<a href=”https://dailypost.wordpress.com/prompts/my-favorite/”>My Favorite</a> 
 

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66 thoughts on “Distant Heart”

    cindy knoke said:
    January 10, 2016 at 6:29 am

    Beautiful!

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    Geetha B said:
    January 10, 2016 at 8:46 am

    Lovely Shiva!

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    michnavs said:
    January 10, 2016 at 10:40 am

    I love it shiva…

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    Erika Kind said:
    January 10, 2016 at 12:39 pm

    That is a beautiful poem, Shiva. The energy of love is not depending on time and space.

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    Laura Clark said:
    January 10, 2016 at 1:31 pm

    Reblogged this on Let it come from the heart and commented:
    A beautiful poem about love.

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    Marc J. Voynet said:
    January 10, 2016 at 3:15 pm

    Beautiful poem 🙂

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    patriciaruthsusan said:
    January 10, 2016 at 3:28 pm

    Quite lovely, Shiva. —- Suzanne

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    Priceless Joy said:
    January 10, 2016 at 4:30 pm

    Very beautiful and heart touching.

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    Maniparna Sengupta Majumder said:
    January 10, 2016 at 10:08 pm

    Beautifully penned… 🙂

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    Deb said:
    January 11, 2016 at 11:55 am

    Oh my goodness Shiva, that made my skin tingle, what we call goosebumps! That is so eloquent and beautifully described. You are a thoughtful soul, I thank you for the gift of you and this poem! Wishing you a creative day!!!
    Deb xo

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    Swetha M said:
    January 11, 2016 at 7:57 pm

    This is very beautiful! Definitely portrays the depth of human spirit, lovely lovely read! Thank you for sharing!

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    Amanda Lyle said:
    January 11, 2016 at 8:49 pm

    Beautifully written, my friend 🙂

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    Vamagandhi said:
    January 12, 2016 at 8:35 am

    I feel distant heart may be victim of doppler effect and may have inverse square relationship with love. Love dwindles and dips down with distance unless it defies physics.

    Beautiful poetry and love surely defies physics!

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      January 12, 2016 at 9:30 am

      You seem to be a Physicist than a Doctor or should I say both and also a Laureate.
      Shiva

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    hooklineandinkwell said:
    January 12, 2016 at 9:17 am

    This is beautiful and full of longing and hope…

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    penneyvanderbilt said:
    January 12, 2016 at 10:54 am

    Reblogged this on Ancien Hippie.

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    i N S P i R E D ! said:
    January 13, 2016 at 3:57 pm

    A creative arrangement of words, particularly the rhymes. Well done!

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    lbeth1950 said:
    January 13, 2016 at 8:51 pm

    You have certainly captured the essence of being a soul mate and astral travel. Thanks for the link. Reblogging.

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      January 14, 2016 at 8:40 am

      Thanks Maam!
      I am glad you reblogged it, I think more than mine, more people are seeing and reading it on your Blog.
      That makes me feel so good.
      So! lovers are spread all over this World.
      There is one more Love Poem still in my Head; yet to come out as words.
      Convey my Love to your Mom please. I only wish she has good health.
      Old age is one which I hate; its inevitable.
      You may read my one poem on that “….in this stupid body”
      Love to You,
      Shiva

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    lbeth1950 said:
    January 13, 2016 at 8:51 pm

    Reblogged this on Nutsrok and commented:
    I love what I just read from Shivasponder.

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    michnavs said:
    January 13, 2016 at 10:23 pm

    Hi shiva, Geetha B mentioned that she first got the form etheree from you which in return i was inspired tp write. I cant find the one you wrote though. Would you be so kind to share the link? … mich

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      January 14, 2016 at 3:57 am

      Dear Michnavs,
      So nice you are interested in the form of Etheree poem wrting.
      The first one I wrote was “The Shining Rock”, this is a reverse Etheree
      https://theshivasponder.wordpress.com/2015/12/01/the-shining-rock/
      The second one I wrote was “Two Beloveds”
      It is a forward (or straight) and also a reverse Etheree in one single Poem.
      https://theshivasponder.wordpress.com/2015/12/11/two-beloveds/
      The information links on that is mentioned in the both Posts itself and you can refer it on where I have mentioned.
      There are some links in the comment box of Two Beloveds poem where we, I mean, I and Geetha have had detailed discussion on that form of writing.
      I personally feel that if we think of the syllables and vowels that are to be taken under consideration then we may have to kill the subject or it may be difficult for the reader to know about it or the whole thing may put to confusion. You may achieve it or not. So I had done it by the count of words not syllables or vowels. She ofcourse tried to convince me or tell me about it but I have my own versions. You may refer the wikipedia link I have mentioned. Please let me know how you feel about it.
      I hope this could be sufficient information for you. You may put your comments on that in the Two Beloveds post, as I have written about it ‘for readers to know’ about that. I hope you understand.
      Do read my both Etherees and tell me how you liked them.
      Wishing You Good, let the pen stop not or your fingers on the key board You finish writing and inform me.
      Love to You,
      Shiva

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      January 15, 2016 at 7:18 am

      Mich!
      Can give the link of the Post You and Geetha discussed about the Etheree form.
      If you have written one, please mention the link.
      Good you have been inspired.
      Stay connected.
      Shiva

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    Deb said:
    January 14, 2016 at 3:15 am

    I had to come back and read again…and the picture is so encompassing too!! Hope you have an enlightening day…much love and light!
    Deb

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      January 14, 2016 at 8:03 pm

      “I am so Happy
      Dear Debbie
      My Distant Heart
      See the way they have taken Part
      Bloggers Four
      Have Reblogged it to Pour
      Comments you Share
      I do Care”
      Shiva

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        Deb said:
        January 15, 2016 at 2:56 am

        I do see that
        In seconds flat
        They’ve taken your poem
        And shared it at home
        They wanted to show
        The love that you sow
        And now you’re a star
        Whose post has gone far
        What a wonderful web
        Big Cheers from me, Deb!
        🙂

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    jacquelineobyikocha said:
    January 14, 2016 at 5:08 am

    Beautiful and evocative.

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    January 14, 2016 at 9:31 am

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    bettylouise31 said:
    January 14, 2016 at 5:19 pm

    Gorgeous!

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    BroadBlogs said:
    January 15, 2016 at 9:51 pm

    Beautiful words and visual.

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    Isabella said:
    January 16, 2016 at 2:48 pm

    ❤ A poem with a lot of love ❤

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    marianthi said:
    January 17, 2016 at 7:43 am

    Wonderful Shiva!! 🙂

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    Fourth Generation Farmgirl said:
    January 19, 2016 at 4:03 pm

    I loved your poignant and beautiful poem, Shiva. Very moving. 🙂

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    Nisthur Anadi said:
    January 20, 2016 at 10:44 am

    That’s awesome. Wonderful, excellent.
    Such a beautiful poem with lots of emotions.

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    thelonelyauthorblog said:
    January 20, 2016 at 5:27 pm

    Absolutely beautiful. I especially love the way you ended this.

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    stacilys said:
    January 20, 2016 at 11:13 pm

    Now that really sounds like soul mates.
    🙂

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    joyindestructible said:
    January 21, 2016 at 3:21 pm

    Very beautiful, Shiva. Great loves never end. Those we love live forever in our hearts, they become part of us. It is part of the experience. Not a part I look forward to…but trust and acceptance is always key. God bless you, Shiva.

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    Ngobesing Romanus said:
    January 22, 2016 at 1:56 pm

    Love has no boundaries. Love breaks bounds. Love is everywhere. What a great poem on love by a great philosopher, Shiva! Thank you for sharing the beauty of love. May your heart be forever filled by love!

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    bethbyrnes said:
    January 22, 2016 at 8:30 pm

    Shiva, so eloquently phrased, there are simply no words to describe this. I love the beautiful photograph and the way these sentiments pierce the veil of distance. Thank you dear friend.

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    Nimmi said:
    January 28, 2016 at 7:54 am

    Aw!! It’s beautiful. The rhyming words are adding the meaning and beauty of the poem. 🙂

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      January 28, 2016 at 8:19 am

      Read the next one also, this Monday I have posted it.
      “Yes! I am Life”
      Please refer my menu Poetry and Photos, you shall get to see all the poems.
      Thanks for everything.
      Shiva

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        Nimmi said:
        February 4, 2016 at 7:16 pm

        Oh! I love to read. By title itself seems interesting.
        Thanks to you too, Sir!! 😊
        Good bless!!

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    shivsagarkanthi said:
    January 28, 2016 at 4:50 pm

    Truly beautiful! : )

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    Shivangi said:
    January 29, 2016 at 7:13 pm

    Loved the line… Tears flow on each other’s face. This is an example of sublime poem, every line is a beauty. Kudos to you on Distant Heart. 🙂

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      January 30, 2016 at 3:57 am

      Thanks Shivangi
      I only wish the smile you keep on your face shall always be there.
      Good Luck to you Dear.
      Shiva

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        Shivangi said:
        January 30, 2016 at 4:52 am

        Thank you for the lovely wishes😀

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    Lisa Mari said:
    January 31, 2016 at 2:19 pm

    Nydelig❤️

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    Nidhi Singh said:
    February 1, 2016 at 4:03 pm

    Wow !! Loved it !

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    Nena said:
    February 1, 2016 at 7:31 pm

    Love how you put it together in the end:
    “No Body required, they Meet Anywhere
    No Place required, they Meet Everywhere”
    Beautiful!!

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    Smiling Notes said:
    February 4, 2016 at 4:05 pm

    Beautifully written! You are really talented!

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    Heartafire said:
    August 10, 2016 at 2:33 pm

    Very lovely, wonderful insight in to the throes of love from a distance Shiva!

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      August 10, 2016 at 2:57 pm

      This was five times re-blogged by five bloggers when published, I was so happy of the recognition.
      Whenever you have the time read my other Poems and Haikus Dear, I shall be overwhelmed.
      Thanks
      Shiva

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        Heartafire said:
        August 10, 2016 at 3:20 pm

        I will be delighted to do that!

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    maureenrose7 said:
    January 9, 2017 at 9:08 pm

    Oh Shiva! this is just beyond any words I could speak! 🙂 ❤ 🙂

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      January 9, 2017 at 9:16 pm

      Oh my! Actually I was sleeping got up for no reason. Just to on and see if there was something on my blog, only to see your this comment. You know it is 2.45 am. So! This is Distant Heart.
      I have no words….
      Maureen!!!
      Shiva
      🎶🔔💓

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        maureenrose7 said:
        January 9, 2017 at 9:23 pm

        ❤ I hope you fall back to sleep to sweet dreams my friend!

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    atrangizindagieksafar said:
    May 7, 2017 at 7:37 am

    This is such a beautiful poem Shiva. Absolutely loved it…. there is a unique flavour in all poems making each one special. Let my internet start and I too shall be reblogging it

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      Shiva Malekopmath responded:
      May 7, 2017 at 8:07 am

      Thanks Ranjini, I shall wait for your internet to come soon. Hope Sunday is getting fine. After having a brunch just now of Hot Idlis and Sambhar I shall be off to bed now again. I saw you liked the “You are the Lad” but was waiting for your valued comments.👀
      Shiva

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        atrangizindagieksafar said:
        May 7, 2017 at 8:31 am

        Comments are pending till my net connection….it was just and indication that I have read it. You know I Normally take my time and comment. It being your post I don’t want to comment in haste

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    MOMENTS said:
    May 25, 2018 at 9:11 pm

    Wow, again a new connection between your poem and mine (“That Burden On My Back”) with the bodies that
    “Wished wings they couldn’t Get”. Love all the rhymes of this poem. I have tried to read it aloud and it sounds very musical and eloquent. The ending is really powerful. Beautifully written!

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